Great game I loved the first episode, now currently trying to reach the second ending. Didn't expect the final trial to change on me like that tbh but glad I was able to reach the end. I also noticed a visual bug which I will show here, so I'd appreciate it someone would fix this.

I love both routes, though Eleven's is more epic, dark, story-extensive and aoishiro-ish, while Mimi's is cute and relationship-focused. And this game looks so beautiful. And most horrifying moment was when shino said she considered not releasing for this spooktober. (and this comment is just in time, ofcourse (i just rewatched the game on someone's letsplay stream xD))

does it will support chinese language

Gotta grab a hand crank charger with me so I can use my phone in the afterlife… 😆

Wow, what an intense, atmospheric journey! The animated BGs, sprites and CGs add a lot of immersion to this 45k word story (super impressive scope!) I appreciated all the references to Chinese mythology and culture, although I felt like it could be incorporated more naturally in dialogue rather than feeling so expository (e.g. how the MC thought of her ex in nickname form but they randomly greeted each other by full names)

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I’m glad I played through and I enjoyed the experience overall!

In the beginning, I was thrown off by how two exhausted women that hiked for hours and hours (one described as very not outdoorsy) could fend off the monsters in pure physical combat. These ghosts are incredibly terrifying on first appearance but during this fight, they felt weak to me, given how slow and incompetent they are at overtaking weakened chars. Maybe a choice to fight smart rather than a blatant physical stand off would fix this?

The rest of the trials were great! I felt so immersed in the recess room with the dark abyss and trial number two with the knocking suspense. The third trial was interesting too with the boxes and rising water even though the it would be nice to have some player input for the puzzle solving. I loved the flashback scene as well and emotional bonding!

Nearing the end, the calling for divine intervention to get them out of the situation felt much too easy. Couldn’t it have been done this whole time? Maybe there could be an obstacle to doing this so it feels earned and it takes more lead up / intentional decisions to accomplish.

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Overall, I love what this VN stands for and I am so glad there’s a wholesome happy ending. The CGs are fantastic and it’s awesome to have more cultural representation. I sincerely hope you continue to develop, smooth out the story and make editing fixes for flow! Below is one of the more wonky grammar examples, which can be fixed by ending the last sentence with *falsehoods. (Quite a few lines like this, but understandable given the immense scope of the script and production.) 

Can’t wait to try any updates or whatever you make next! ❤️ I enjoyed Red Queen too! 

I saved your game for the last of Spooktober entries I wanted to try, as I guessed it would be my favorite - and it was! :P

(Copied from my Spooktober rating page review to help this game within itch.io's algorithm!)

Love some of the camerawork and cinematography you used in this VN. I can tell you've read a lot of VNs because some of the shots you used are utterly breathtaking: like the opening scene, the cut-ins with Eleven announcing the status of each survival game, and the panning up to the starry night sky. 

I also can't stop thinking about the trials you created for Hailu and the other dead participants. They're legitimately frightening at times: I was jumpscared by the sudden appearance of a hungry ghost when Mimi and Hailu were running through the seventh floor in the third trial. 

All in all, thanks for creating such a great work!

Is this completed?

Is this game compatible with MacOS?

I loved Hailu's interactions with Eleven, but I can't not root for Mimi! 

Atmospheric, wonderfully unsettling in many ways, with a heartfelt throughline in both routes to be honest! Both routes complete each other so nicely, this was a fantastic read!

Beautiful graphics and a wonderfully descriptive, dramatic story. I was interested in Eleven but you had me heavily invested in the Mimi route. Honestly may revisit the VN on stream after October to go through Eleven's route! I'm very curious and had SO much fun reading through this one. Ps I still want Mimi's charger.

good novel

Wow, the designs of the background was godly. I sometimes paused on them and be like “hooo. Nice background” :<

The animation and sprite were pretty cute too.

If one thing was missing compared to the outstanding art, I thought it was the story (especially the one with the judge - I felt their relationship was a bit hollow), but still I found that the ex-lover branch was pretty endearing ! It was very hard to ignore her to complete the second ending >_>

Very nice ! Is that even a jam game ? Felt way too well polished to be one >_<

this vn was so good!! lovely and fitting soundtrack, beautiful character design and such a pretty UI!! i especially loved the monster design, very spooky.  very happy to see the accessibility options too. well written and enjoyable, great work all!!

This was pretty lovely, big props to the team.

The music was very pleasant, effects p nice (esp for a jam submission), plot and characters fairly well written + all the art and UI beautifully done,  realized and fitting (sorry if i forgot something else! pls no offense~ 'w`).

A solid one, though i must admit that among the Shinoverse my favorite is still the Red Queen >:3 best of luck in this jam here and in yalls future endeavors, they are all appreciated and good!!!!!! peace~

I'm so excited to play!!!